Brother’s cycle
My
brother has a cycle. It’s a common cycle. It’s small but very friendly with him.
Slowing cycle can make him happiness. His cycle always accompany him to go to
school and anywhere he wants to go.
His
cycle has blue and black color. The wheel
is big. Annoying sound of bell is very unique to hear. He cleans it every week
when holiday. According him, cleaning cycle is enjoyable and amazing activity. He
do loves it even he rides it.
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