Kamis, 29 Januari 2015

Structure Project (pararelism)

Konsep Pararelisme di Dalam Pembuatan Kalimat Bahasa Inggris
Sebuah keseimbangan antara dua atau lebih kata, frase, serta klausa dinamakan dengan paralelisme di dalam tata bahasa Inggris. Menggunakan pararelisme yang benar, anda akan mendapatkan struktur kalimat yang bagus, gaya bahasa yang efektif, serta mencegah kerancuan di dalam kalimat.
Contoh pararelisme di dalam bahasa Inggris:
Andre likes playing football, basketball, and plays the drum. (False)
Andre likes playing football, basketball, and drum. (True)
Kalimat pertama salah karena tidak efektif. Paralelisme yang digunakan seharusnya tidak perlu lagi mencantukan kata kerja plays. Karena semua kata kerja bermuara pada plays, maka cukup ucapkan satu kali saja di awal kalimat.
My brother listened to the music, took a bath, and gone to the English course. (False)
My brother listened to the music, took a bath, and went to the English course. (True)
Kalimat pertama salah karena konsep paralelisme adalah kesamaan. Lihat kata kerja yang digunakan pada kalimat pertama, kata kerja pertama (listened) dan kedua (took) menggunakan kata kerja past tense. Namun kata kerja ketiga (gone) menggunakan past participle. Tentu saja, seharusnya kata kerja ketiga juga merupakan past tense yaitu went bukan gone.
Swimming, dance, and reading are my hobby. (False)
Swimming, dancing, and reading are my hobby. (True)

Kalimat pertama salah karena maksunya adalah berenang, menari, dan membaca adalah hobi saya. Namun, di kalimat pertama, artinya adalah berenang, tarian, dan membaca adalah hobi saya. Tentu ini tidak termasuk ke dalam konsep pararelisme dimana terdapat kata yang bermakna serta berstruktur sama.

Argumetation Paragraphs

Playing Guitar

            There are many reasons why I like playing guitar. First, playing guitar is enjoyable and makes me happy. Its sounds of string can produce a voiced which makes soul peace. Second, playing guitar is cheap. We don’t need buy anything when plays it. Third, playing guitar is environmentally friendly. Because, it don’t disturb when we play it. 

Compound-Complex Sentence

 Compound – complex sentence (kalimat majemuk campuran)
The compound –complex sentences is a sentence with two or more independent clause and at least one dependent clause. The compound- complex sentences is so named because it shares the characteristics of both compound and complex sentences.
·         Terdapat minimal 3 kalimat (S+V)
·         Conjunction : compound and complex conj
·         Clause : MC& SC
·         Pola : S+V compound conj S+V complex conj S+V
           MC                              MC    SC
Eg : wanto was taking a bath and citra was sleeping when susi came.
                         MC                compound      MC             complex  SC

                                                     Conj                                 conj 

Persuasive Essay

Girl ++

Girl ++ has been spread out of the world. People from many countries know it. When a girl called with it, she looked down by some people. In fact, there are not all girls ++. Maybe, they need its work. Because, a factor economy, cheated, and life style. It makes them go into in that wrong area. So, Factor compulsion causes it all.           

In addition, there is person hate them, and there is person want them. Person who hate girl ++ think that girl ++ has no quality because, it causes the illness society. In another side, girl ++ try to justify their opinion with explain how and what is girl ++ in correct view, but it does not work. Therefore, someone who loves girl ++ needs sense of awareness. They should keep haters of girl ++ feeling by appreciate their opinion and be taking care in presenting. 

Structure Project (Complex Sentence)



Complex sentence (kalimat majemuk bertingkat)
A complex sentence has an independent clause joined by one or more dependent clauses
·         Terdapat minimal 2 kalimat (S+V)
·         Conjunction : complex conjunction (sub ordinative conj)
                        (Because, After, before,…..)
·         Clause : MC & SC
·         Pola : S+V complex conj  S+V
         MC        sub ordinative conj
                          SC
Eg : rooney is reading a book, after  tuti comes
        MC                               complex conj
                                                      SC

Writing practice : interpreting ideas (Compound sentence)

1. idea : "How about your school?"
    interpretation : my school is famous, but my school is small.
2. idea : "What do you think about Mita?"
    interpretation : she is beautiful girl, and she is smart girl.
3. idea : "Playing guitar and singing can make us happiness".
    interpretation : I agree, for Shely disagree.

Compound Sentence

      Compound sentence (kalimat majemuk setara)
A compound sentence contains two independent clauses joined by a coordinator.
·         Terdapat minimal 2 kalimat (S+V)
·         Conjunction : compound conjunction
                        (For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So)
·         Clause : MC & MC
·         Pola : S+V   COMPOUND     S+V
           MC  CONJUNTION    MC
Eg : he is handsome but he is arrogant
               MC         compound      MC

                                   conj

writing practice : a complain latter (phares and clause)

Al Trucks
61371 Mojokerto
Indonesia

13 May 2014
Attn: Mrs. Viona Quinn
Sales Manager
MAN Truck
911 Frankfrut Rd.
Frankfurt
Germany

Dear Mrs. Quinn,
Re. Order No. 1271235
I’m writing to inform you that the goods we ordered from your company have not been supplied corectly.
On 28 April 2014 we placed an order with your firm for 500 trucks with red paint, 300 trucks with black paint and 50 truck with yellow paint. The trucks arrived yesterday but all truck come with white paint.
This error put our firm in  difficult position, as we had to make some emergency by stopping distribution our truck. This caused our bussines stop.
I am waiting to ask you to please make up the shortfall immediately and to ensure that errors do not happen again. Otherwise, we may have to look elsewhere for our supply.
I look forward to hearing from you by return.

Yours sincerely,


James Milner

Purchasing Officer